Well, I have not had much to say regarding this poem, aside from the fact that I'm rather fond of it. First of all, because I'm happy to see you posting your thoughts somewhere instead of keeping them inside and forcing me to drag them out of you ( as we have already know, I can and will take drastic measures when I feel the need. Beware, I can tickle much better than that!). Second of all, it's just a good poem. It comes to me as a confused/yearning mood, and you seem to have paralled two men in the 2nd to last stanza, though you told me you didn't mean to. Either way, it's effective. Never doubt yourself, you're an excellant writer, and if you complain about my compliments again... I shall have to slap you with a trout. Good day!
Love ya,
Bryant
The Poet of Darkness